This is such a wonderful poem Billie-Jade. You have some great similes in there to compare ideas to things we know, like the sound of hungry seagulls. I really like your Personification of waves CLAMBERING over the golden sand. This gives the reader very clear visual images. Thanks for sharing Miss J
This is such a wonderful poem Billie-Jade. You have some great similes in there to compare ideas to things we know, like the sound of hungry seagulls. I really like your Personification of waves CLAMBERING over the golden sand. This gives the reader very clear visual images.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing
Miss J